Two brothers sat and watched through their window as the rain fell down
in thick sheets. This was an incredible sight for the brothers as their country
was dry and their entire lives they had never seen more than a light drizzle. So,
intrigued by the falling walls of water, the brothers left their home and went
into the mountains to watch the rain cover their town. Now, as the brothers
walked through the mountain, with droplets trickling down off leaves and over
rocks, they came upon a straight where two slanted shelves captured the rain
and sent it rushing down the mountain in a mighty current. The brothers were in
awe at what they had found. It was as if they had gone up the mountain and
entered another world full of wonders they were never able to imagine. The
older brother told the younger to wait beside the new river as he climbed up a
thick oak tree that arched over the water and hung at its center. Now the tree
was wet and slick, and the brother had only a small nub to pull himself up, but
he was able to manage up the trunk and into the branches. The older brother
stood up in the branches and watched the river rush down the mountain, running
and jumping in a smooth unstoppable current. The clouds parted for only a
moment and the sun glinted across the patterns of the current before the gap
closed again and the sun was gone. The older brother watched the water and
listened to the steady rush of the river, losing himself in the rhythm of the
current that swept below his feet. He stared into the water as he thought of
stepping off the branch and letting himself fall in. He thought of himself
falling into the river, crashing beneath the surface, and then letting the
current carry him down on his back as the waters trickled over his body and the
drops of rain fell and dotted his face. He could feel his feet moving to step
off the branch when his younger brother called to him to come down. The younger
brother stood at the base of the tree soaked through to his socks, watching his
brother up in the branches. The older brother lowered himself from the branches
and dug his heel into the knot on the trunk. He had a good grip on the knot,
but the trunk was slick and when he let go of the branch his foot slipped and
he fell sideways down the trunk and landed with a splash. He had fallen right
at the edge of the river covering his front side in mud. Only his head had gone
in the water and that was nothing at all considering both he and his brother
were soaked. So the two left the new river they had found and ran down the
mountain, through the rain.
The boys ran home and told their mother about the river they had found,
and when she saw them soaked, dripping on the floor, she was horrified. She was
hysterical and began to yell and cry about how they could have been killed. The
older brother tried to tell his mother that it was all fine and nothing would
have happened, but she just threw the newspaper from the day before in the
puddle at his feet and left the room. The headline read in bold print “Man Swept Away: Found Dead”, and there
was a picture of the river and the oak tree hanging over the water. The man had
fallen in off the bank and drowned after being knocked unconscious. They found
his body washed up at the base of the mountain with nearly every bone in his
body broken, including his skull which had been crushed into mostly missing
fragments.
In a week the rains had gone and
the older brother went back into the mountains alone. The oak tree still stood
arching over the shelf but the river was dried up, revealing dozens of jagged
boulders beneath the tree and running down the straight that had been
completely covered with water the week before. The boy climbed up on one of the
boulders beneath the tree and sat staring down the dry shelf until the sun went
down.
The story telling style is fable-like.... Which I always enjoy. nice work!
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